Meh.
Thatās good, why arenāt you sure though?
Meh.
Thatās good, why arenāt you sure though?
Stomachache
Should that be one word?
Finally done Thanks for being patient even though theyāre kind of crappy which I apologize for, haha
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Hey!! How are you? (:
Fine
Anyone only and available for a moment of your time?
Whatās up?
Can I have some constructive criticism?
Matilda has been living in Marlfield since she can remember. Growing up on a farm with countless animals and acres of corn and wheat. Matilda had an overprotective mother who constantly kept Matilda away from the surrounding woods. However, every once and awhile she would sneak past her into the dense woods. The woods were Matildaās happy place. It was quiet and went on for miles. Not to mention the beauty in it. Matilda always had a sense for animals. Any animal she touched would calm in an instant. Her father called it a superpower, however she took the realistic approach to it and figured it was just her calm demeanor. Matilda was homeschooled the best she could and only had interactions with her parents or animals. It was just last month when Matildaās mother unfortunately passed away due to kidney failure. Sheād been on the waitlist for years, but even if she got a kidney the family wouldnāt be able to afford it. Matilda was devastated and was unable to look at the woods without shame for herself. If she wasnāt so busy in the woods, maybe she couldāve spent more time with her mother.
Is it possible for you to show a little more of Matilda and her motherās relationship? It makes the end better because the end kinda seems a bit misaligned with what you wrote at the top.
I can do that! Thank you
Any artists wanting to join a massive art competition?
Iām not gonna be active for a few days.
Howās this?
Matilda has been living in Marlfield since she can remember. Growing up on a farm with countless animals and acres of corn and wheat.
Matilda always had a sense for animals. Any animal she touched would calm in an instant. Her father called it a superpower, however she took the realistic approach to it and figured it was just her calm demeanor.
Matildaās mother was very overprotective and constantly kept Matilda away from the surrounding woods. However, every once and awhile she would sneak past her into the dense woods. The woods were Matildaās happy place. It was quiet and went on for miles. Not to mention the beauty in it.
Matilda was very close with her mother. Rather than teaching Matilda how to ride a bike she taught her how to ride a horse.
Every night Matildaās mother would walk into the room and serve her warm milk to help her sleep. Matilda was never fond of the night.
It was just last month when Matildaās mother unfortunately passed away due to kidney failure. Sheād been on the waitlist for years, but even if she got a kidney the family wouldnāt be able to afford it. Matilda was devastated and was unable to look at the woods without shame for herself. If she wasnāt so busy in the woods, maybe she couldāve spent more time with her mother.
That night, she sat in her bed waiting for her mother and when she didnāt appear, Matilda realized she was truly gone.
Itās much better. What you included makes it easier for people to understand why she would be ashamed of herself and gives us an insight into her relationship with her mother.
All in all itās really good.
Thank you for your help
Finally finished drawing another character!
The hair is bothering me still, but it is what it is.
@katabasis I thought you might want to see how he turned out.
(: Iām making post soon, choose some characters of mine
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Does anyone want to plan stuff with my characters for the party?
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Caspian and Ariadne?