How Should I Narrate This?

It’s their first kiss! And their names are Anna and Eli! Any suggestions?

@Writers

1 Like

You could write it as other authors write it, like:

“Her lips crashed mine and she tasted like…”

It is a bit cringe and cliche tho

3 Likes

Omg who made that amazing art scene? :heart_eyes:

2 Likes

My friend

1 Like

They’re so talented!

1 Like

Closed thread due to OP breaking the Criticism rule multiple times.