Ohhhh I see I misunderstooddd
I noticed that 
I loved that actually ahahah
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Thank you!
I wanted to make it public… but I don’t know how to enable the comments…
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cry 
I wanted to leave a witty comment
Idk how to do that though, I’ve never posted anything on the tube
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Okay, I made the there right there one public… i think
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And the second one as well! NOW YOU CAN COMMENT YAY!
YES
aww 
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sorry
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It’s ok
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@CrazyCaliope - I’d love to hear your opinion, you can make a harsh criticism like really, you don’t have to try to make it positive. As I’m trying to grow and learn. Alright! I hope you’ll like it!
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I just read the first 10 or so lines and am LOVING the descriptions of the market and his feelings. Though I have stuff to do now but it’s in an open tab and will finish it later.
Just one question about this sentence, “He stopped just right at the entrance.” Did he stop at the entrance or to the right of it? 'Cause you might want to to tweak it slightly for whichever. Either “He stopped right in front of the entrance” or “He stopped at the entrance” or if it’s to the right, “He stopped just to the right of the entrance”.
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@Cam - please, judge me
YAY! SO happyyyyy! Thank youuuu! AHHHHH I’M SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT!
That’s what I meant! I’ll edit it later, thank youuuu
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food
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Marta’s rise to fame I see
HERE for it yes
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food…? lmao
My fanfic has the least hits of all of them, lmao
But, yes, let’s send it to Josh and Luke lmao
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SHHH logic has no place here 
once you’re done the whole thing I literally will
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kdhbcdhfv i call fanfic food most of the time kdbfv sorry
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LMAO NOOOO
Can you imagine their reactions?
Like 
what is that
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HAHAHAHA, I get it.
And same tho, same, lmao
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just read it!
it’s nice
v intriguing
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Thank you! I’m glad you like it!
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