I actually thought about that… She THINKS everything is back to normal but then when she goes to clean up something, she sees the shovel she used to kill the guy with…
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When you’re finished you should totally make it a Wattpad story or even a novel. It sounds interesting.
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Definitely agree with this. I think you should do the same too with your story as well. they both good stories.
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Crap. Working on it.
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You’re good. You technically have until the third prompt to turn it in. That is two weeks away plus you can do it in incrimates.
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Theme:
It’s about a girl who is fairly normal, she lives in a small town and at summer her mum and dad break up and she moves to Tobermory. She has to adjust to life in the small island, she meets some new friends and gets a crush. But then discovers that there are creatures living amongst them. She finds out that she is the witch of the story an nd she has to end a feud between the werewolves and vamipres, only everyone she knows is a supernatural so how can she decide on one species… Especially if it means that the rest must die.
Slightly thought out draft, not gone into depth with the idea yet
Characters - these are all maybes
Maddie
Flirt, fenale. She knows how to get what she wants from others.
Arvia
She is the mc. I think she will be compassionate but easily gets jealous.
JayI
Jay is the music living guy, he crushes on Arvia
More too
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I’ll comment later. I’m at work until 9 tonight.
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This is a good plot to go with. I would go over the more about the creatures and the story she is supposed to be part of. How does she discover the creatures? Why did her parents divorce? How does she deal with having to make such a major decision about which race gets to live? Why does she need to make this decision? Just keep in mind these questions when you go deeper into the story. I will @ShanniiWrites to your post as well.
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I really like this idea! What I’d the feud about? Why do the vampires and werewolves hate each other so much?
Also can you raise the stakes some more for her? What happens if she doesn’t settle this feud? Does something happen to her or them?
And why is she so emotionally invested? Does she have a love interest, a family member or a best friend who’s one of the magical creatures? If so, i suggest making sure that you have people of equal importance to her on either side. Love triangles can get boring, cliche and repetitive, but they work best in a story like this: where when she decides which side is the “correct” side, she loses the love interest from that side.
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Thanks guys! 
I’ll add in all that soon.
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It’s about a girl who is fairly normal, she lives in a small town and at summer her mum and dad break up and she moves to Tobermory. She has to adjust to life in the small island, she meets some new friends and gets a crush. But then discovers that there are creatures living amongst them - werewolves, vampires, selkies… Witches. She finds out that she is the witch of the story an nd she has to end a feud between the werewolves and vamipres, only everyone she knows is a supernatural so how can she decide on one species… Especially if it means that the rest must die.
But if Arvia doesn t choose then the supernatural will tear apart the world with their feud until there is nothing left.
Her aunt Heather is a werewolf, her best friend Maddie is a selkie and Jay is a human. There are more supernaturals, too.
Davis is on a timer. Each night, one human ends up dead. Whether the were drowned, eaten, or just killed doesn t matter. If she can’t make a choice by the time all the islanders humans are dead, she will have failed and the Supernaturals will rule, and no one will be able to stop them.
Is that a bit better?
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Definitely much better!! Wanna start a PM so we can chat? 
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In throwing in a twin sister who will appear later on.
I’m going to say that arvia is actually her aunts daughter and her mom adopted her, and she will find out quite far in.
The twin will be daughter of the Aunt
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Update!
I will be at my aunts house with my sister. That means no internet on wednesday and most of thursday for this week. I will post the prompt on late thursday night or friday night instead. If you prefer friday this week please let me know below this comment.
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Bookmark this post! Also updated original post as well!
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Here is my entry!
Theme: Supernatural Romance
Plot: Three Triplet’s of the Mortesaki family are tied to a prophecy that could change the 13 dimensions in a devastating cataclysm or could bring peace back to the 13 dimensions. The triplets are hybrid wolf-ice dragons, this makes their lives harder than most since pure-bloods look down on them often. Especially, the eldest of the triplets, she was born blind and is seen as wild monster versus a normal immortal. Can the three get through their lives without losing themselves to the prophecies dark truths?
Main Characters: Dantesha Shardae-Mortesaki, Danika Shardae-Mortesaki, Dione Shardae-Mortesaki
Prompt Two
This week you will be finishing up on Prompt One’s homework. If you think you aren’t going to make the deadline by prompt three then just message me so that I know. Also, don’t forget to let your proofreader know. If you are late then I won’t switch your proofreader out until you make your post for the missed Prompt. I got back to the house earlier than I thought so we are on time this week!
Discussion: You will be discussing how you came up with your theme, characters, and plot. Discuss the struggles when writing out ideas. Answer these questions over the week. Ask other writers and proofreaders questions over last week’s prompt. What was harder to do? Why did you choose these characters? Is this a new idea for a story or has this been something you have been working on?
Writers:
@ChaoticDeluge
@MeghanWrites
@katabasis
@BlackBlood
@WritingWithStars
Proofreaders: Participate in questions as well!
@ShanniiWrites
@Jass
@Kimballet
@Kanubish
@liyahsdiamond
@LHT
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I mean I’m kind of rethinking everything now cause I sort of just went with the first idea i had but now I’ve thought up an original idea and I’m not sure if I’m just gonna pull a switcheroo now before we get too far in…
But I also think my new idea would make a good rp so yeah … I’m indecisive… >.<
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You can change your story if you like. Just post the same details as you did with the first one!
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My biggest struggle was picking which story I wanted to write on. I had four to choose from but I went with Souls with help from @liyahsdiamond. I have been working on this story for a long time now. I chose the names long ago where I went through several baby name pages, inspiration from other books, and I came up with many on my own. I chose triplets because it’s a unique and rare chance to have more than 1 child and I also had to count in that since my characters have animal forms they would give birth to the same amount of babies that their animal has. Like I said this is one of my oldest series which I have been working on it since middle school.
Reminder for those who haven’t posted for Prompt one: Please post before or by Thursday. Contact me if you can’t. I won’t switch your proofreaders until you post for the first prompt.
Reminder for those who haven’t Posted for the Prompt two: Please answer the questions. It makes the writing process easier because you are discussing it between everyone. Answer questions from Prompt two post above.
@BlackBlood
@WritingWithStars
@MeghanWrites
Reminder for Proofreaders for Prompt two: Ask the writers questions about their experience coming up with the said topic.
@liyahsdiamond
@ShanniiWrites
@Kanubish
@Jass
@Kimballet
@LHT
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