they are from different providence so yeah (divorced parents and all, raising them in different places since like age 5)
ikr
they are from different providence so yeah (divorced parents and all, raising them in different places since like age 5)
ikr
mee
He is 26!
Enzo is middle-aged
Theyāre were raised in different provinces because after their parents divorced the mother moved and took one of the daughter to live in a different province
Iām not sure why, but Iām mentally blocking myself now itās actually time. Idk, Iām just somewhat insecure writing I guessā¦ And kinda being to tough on myself about my characters
I know what thatās like ā¦ How about you interact with a lesser character, one whose story isnāt so intricate just to get you in the gist and to convince you how your writing is nothing to be insecure about? I have 3 maids who have small backstories so they have some personality and you could interact with them before getting ready for the important characters
Who you got
You can do it
like everyone:
Lorelai
Lum
Dariana
And ceasar (another guard who is the brother of Lore)
That might be a good start yes, and instead of starting with all 4 of my girls just focus on one of them in the first message just so I ease into it a bit more. Any of your maids specifically I could interact with?
No, pick any of the 3
Sounds good. Thank you btw, I appreciate this!
I donāt at this point.
But I can find some pictures for the castle later today (probably tonight)
You can do it Jass! Your characters are great, and you have no reason to doubt yourself
also littlefeets submitted by boi Archer
No problem, If it were me I would want to ease into it like that too
ALREADY? Youāre a champ!
all I ever need is a faceclaim
Thanks, I guess it mainly is a language thing for me. I just read everyone elseās posts and itās all written so well. While my English is pretty decent, but my vocabulary just isnāt as big as I would like it to be for writing
Yeah I just assumed it wasnāt going to be anything like urban as she is a lower caste girl and I want her area to have like bohemian/indian/African enspired vibes