Emma. She can be anywhere
I have all of my characters aside from Austin and Reuben and supposedly Colton-Elliot.
Molly?
Okay. She’ll likely be in the Dining Pavilion if that’s alright with you?
fine with me ![]()
Do you want me to post first?
Yes please
Hey guys, sorry been busy but will try to post responses for everyone tonight/tommorow
Does anybody else have approachable characters?
Akio is approachable (:
I wrote a short post for him not too long ago
I have every character aside from Reuben, Austin, Molly, and I guess Colton-Elliot?
Sorry, took me awhile to go through the faceclaims on my phone— Audrey might be interesting but I’m good with anyone (:
Okay Audrey, I’ll go ahead and post ![]()
Alright, ty!!
Keeping Things In Forum Guidelines.
If you were on the Lime Grove RP you’ve already seen that our RPStaff has started a sweep through on the RPs to keep everything following a PG-13 guideline. Our RP moderator has been kind enough to let me deal with it as I see fit and I want things to be comfortable with everyone because I know I would like anyone to do the same with something that triggers me. Let’s begin, this is not meant to shame anyone, this is meant to be an example. I want everyone to know what is appropraite for these guidelines. Please either PM me or respond letting me know if you’ll be following my suggestions or you’d like my to completely take down your character. If you get triggered by these subjects, simply don’t read then. It’s been looked over by me and @CrazyCaliope and it doesn’t need someone to look it over just to read and be curious or make comments on it if it may hurt them mentally. Please don’t be discouraged, I myself have to change around 3 characters as well.
TW
Abuse ![]()
Zagon, Leilani
- “This left Zagon frequently abused and harassed.” ~ It’s become clear with his backstory that this happened, I’d like your permission to remove this part. (@fal.renet1398)
- " It consisted of Leilani getting yelled at and physically abused which triggered her to use her charmspeak, she had wished that he would be treated the same she was." ~ I would appreciate it being reworded, it seems this is an easy way for her to aqquire her abilities. Perhaps if you could reword it so it’s implied but not directly mentioned and have her discover her abilities somehow else. (@euphoriaa)
TW:
Graphic Detail and Underage Activity ![]()
Azalea
- “After a while, Azalea got tired and decided to smoke and that’s when it all went downhill. At first, it was only smoking but then she started on weed, cocaine, heroin and the likes.” - Too many illegal drugs mentioned as well as marijuana/weed being a gateway drug. Please reword this and mention it indirectly if you must.
- “After a few months into her new lifestyle” ~ This could be classified as promotion in some ways, I would like this to either be removed or reworded.
- “daily heroin” - Daily, she would die with all these drugs. No magic, or deus ex machnica would save her.
- “then discharged” Most likely unrealistic, she would be stuck in rehab and dealing with the police. Maybe ran away? Perhaps destroyed the place? She wouldn’t have been discharged.
- “She went straight to her house only to find her father dead and suicide note attached to his body. She read everything and was heartbroken. She couldn’t believe that everything she was ever told was a lie.” ~ Suicide should be treaded on carefully, a rewording is needed for this, or perhaps deletion if the rewording isn’t well.
- Her personality needs to be proofread to be comprehended correctly and match with all the trauma she apparently went through.
Austin
- “He ran away in fear and hasn’t seen his sister since. After he ran away everybody suspected him of killing his mother, so he ran from town to town learning ways to defend himself.” ~ Realistically he’s five years old and this wouldn’t happen to him. He can’t even run away. He’s 5.
- “In the town of Missouri he learned karate and became a black belt in the first 3 weeks he attended, afterwards he went to a new town.” ~ Reaching that level of martial arts in such short time would be impossible. There needs to preparation for the grading and such, it would take 6+ months, much less than less than 1.
- “At age 16 Austin finally decided to go and finish school” - After not going to school at all, he thinks he can suddenly finish it in a year. Mary-Sue alert! Perhaps, look over this and maybe he didn’t finsih it.
- Personality is contradictory. ~ Maybe take a relook and edit it.
Damarco
Backstory is extremely graphic and should be changed.
Haeven
- “She saw the life drained out of each and every one of them and the bullet wounds that were flooded by the intense amount of blood-which not to mention, was on her too.” - Extremely graphic, rewording and a tone down on the wording and phrasing.
@CHBRPers - For future reference.
This ain’t his backstory
I’ll edit it.
Ahh, sorry, she must’ve meant his backstory in general then. Will fix now.
So then I’ll need you to send me Damarco’s backstory and Azalea’s too along with her personality. I can’t go through the slides on my phone. And I’m sorry if this sounds rude in any way.
Yeah go for it i was planing on re writing some of the bios and stuff a bit anyway because they are kind of poop and I have gotten much better at writing sense then
I’m not on my laptop so same as well, I’ll try to get them when I do.
Awesome, thanks Fal!