Can someone check my writing?

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I mean… you’ve read it, haha

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HUH

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OH

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Yeah, I sent you this earlier, after all!

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BYE WHY IDNT YOU TELL ME THIS BEFORE

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OH I go leave comment now then :dancer:t5:

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Because I thought you wanted to read this again or something, to have like the full experiance

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AHHHHH! THANK YOU!!!

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Whot :woman_standing:t5:
Okay then :joy::joy:

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But if you want to read it when the chapter is published, I can tag you when everything is check-proofed and done, if you’d like!

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I WILLL for sureee

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Duh yes of course

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Alright!

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Thank you! Also, any type of criticism is welcome!

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Did you see ma comment? :star_struck:

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pfffffffffffffffft it will be hard to find some

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I DID! I loved it!

Well, a positive one is welcome as well, haha. No, I honestly just you will enjoy it and cry

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ohhh i didn’t know positive criticism was even a thing :joy:

ANYWAYS
DANG I ALMOST CRIED BECAUSE #RELATABLE
But
dang
that’s really heartbreaking
on the bright side, I’m on the GaFou ship 99999% now

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:star_struck::star_struck:

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Oh, noooo! I’m sorry! I promise that the third chapter is going to be funnier, I promise!

Honestly, I felt heartbroken when I was writing the “I promise” scene, soooo I get it

MUHAHAHAHAHA YASSSS :smiling_imp:

I commented back! Also, I’ve written 600 words of the second chapter. :star_struck:

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