Character Design Help

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Hello, so I started working on a new story and I wanted some second opinions and help on some characters and their designs. The characters have two different backgrounds and nationalities, which is why I wanted some opinions. Briar is supposed to be half Indian and Black, while Moon is supposed to be Korean. I made both characters in ink and LL, so please give me your honest thoughts.

Briar

10 Days Characters (Briar)
10 Days Characters (Briar)310×650 165 KB

Briar (INK)

10 Days Characters (Briar) (INK)
10 Days Characters (Briar) (INK)310×650 116 KB

Moon

10 Days Characters (Moon)
10 Days Characters (Moon)310×650 190 KB

Moon (INK)

10 Days Characters (Moon) (INK)
10 Days Characters (Moon) (INK)310×650 196 KB

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I think Deepset Downturned Wide would work better for Briar’s eyes, and the Brown Black hair color for her hair color

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Thank you so much😊

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You’re welcome!

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Do you need more help, @Ari101?

Also, moved sections and added another tag.

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