I’m currently working on a story called “Dominance”, I need help on the description and I was wondering if you guys would give me your opinions on it. Thank you very much for those who decide to help.
Aaliyah moved away from Red Creek two years ago due to a terrible incident that Ryan had control over. She has now moved back, and Ryan wants forgiveness from her, she wants nothing to with him. Ryan said he would do ANYTHING for her to talk to him, so she takes on the deal. Anything she wants, when she wants it. But Ryan’s girlfriend is not too fond of that and she goes crazy and all that, and tries to ruin Aaliyah’s life.
I would also very much love feedback on my character Aaliyah. Tell me the word you first think of when you see her.
Aaliyah departed Red Creek two years ago due to a incident controlled by Ryan. Now she returns and Ryan seeks forgiveness, but she wants nothing to do with him. Ryan pledges he will do ANYTHING to be friends again, and she accepts. But Ryan’s girlfriend soon hears of this, and she is out for blood…