Episode Featured Story Discussion: The Billionaire's Bride

Hey! It’s been a while since we’ve had Episode story discussions, so yeah!
Today, we’ll be discussing ‘The Billionaire’s Bride’ by Viola Musaraj. Sounds cliche, but okay, let’s start.

There’s literally no point putting ‘Will you resist falling in love with playboy billionaire?’ because we all know the answer is gonna be NO. Though I’d like to see a story where the MC doesn’t fall for the LI but gets out of their toxic relationship and become a successful, independent woman. But ehh, we all know that’s not possible.

Okay, here’s the context: MC is in a bar with her two BFFs because her boyfriend cheated on her. Why are we asked who she cheated with? Who knows!

Ahh yis, the only goal in MC’s life is to find a HAWT, rich man to sleep with.

WHO TF ARE YOU?!
Don’t tell me that’s the LI-

The next day, MC and her stereotypical black, energetic BFF are at a book reading or smth? And they have to sell books??? Idk, I didn’t pay much attention, lol. I WAS ONLY HERE FOR THE HAWT GUY, AFTER ALL :heart_eyes:

Ahem, anyway, there’s MC’s rival called Shannon who’s obviously mean and looks like a plastic Barbie doll with terrible roasting skills.

Anyway, after Barbie Doll walks away, the BFF spots le hawt guys who can’t keep their eyes off the MC.

Wowo, we get to choose between Vincent: the nerdy boii, Hunter: the outdoor-y boii, and Armando: the rebel boii.

OMG WOW HE’S THE BILLIONAIRE ITALIAN MAFIA BOSSS!!

Wait, no, I meant BILLIONAIRE WEREWOLF ITALIAN MAFIA BOSS!
Ofc, the bad boii has a beard, piercings, a skull tattoo on his chest, and a shirt that can’t be buttoned up.

WOWO OUR FIRST GEM CHOICEEE! I was wondering where they were… First 5 mins into the story and no gem choices? That’s really sus.

Also, erm, that’s Vincent. After talking with all the three, I got the choice to choose who I’m gonna sit with or smth and I chose him. I also had the option to customise him, and uh, yes, that’s how he looks now.

After leaving the library, MC goes to her dad’s company or whatever, and demands that she become the CEO. But dad refused because idk. We find out that he’s trying to sell the company or smth…

Ah, yes, the MC has mommy/daddy issues.

The MC goes home after that, and we get to choose our pet! That’s niceee.

Obviously, I chose the catto and I love its name! One point for creativity.

MC gets a text message from a stranger and assumes that it’s Vincent, AND GUESS WHAT! IT IS HIM! Also, erm, you asked Shen for MC’s number… Stalker much?

EW EW EW-

The BFF walks into MC’s house and asks if she wants to go dances. Obviously, we can’t say no, 'cause it’s important to the plot ig… Even if we do, BFF always manages to convince the MC.

BFF also asks MC to invite the LI 'cause why not?

While convincing MC, this happens…
LIKE EW STAPH
MY NOTORIOUS V.A.G. IS MY BUSINESS
NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS STFU

MC asks LI and he says yes.
Also, I missed you, gem choice senpai.

Wear something sweet or chic or a cheap outfit. CHEAP OUTFIT??
Gurl, you have fancy clothes with an even fancier room WHICH IS JUST FOR CLOTHES. If you’re rich, just go all out. Why do you need to keep the cheap outfit?!

Ugh, anyway, MC and BFF reach the club and LI is like- i WaNnA kIsS yOu RiGhT nOw
YOU LITERALLY MET HER YESTERDAY DUDE

They start dancing and MC immediately has the thought that everyone must be picturing him naked-

Uhh MC finds out through BFF that LI is the billionaire playboy heir to a rich company or smth, and the episode ends with LI saying he wants MC to be his.


Sigh… that was a lot…
I’d say this is alright… A bit better than the other featured stories, but that’s just me…

  • What do you guys think?
  • Have you read this story?
  • If yes, how was it?
  • If no, would you read it?

@Episodians

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LOL THE MAFIA BOSS IS FRENCH?? BIGGEST PLOT TWIST OF THE FEATURED STORIES

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WHAT NO

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Wtf is this???

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Episode at its finest.

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I don’t know why the word ‘billionaire’ always turns me off from reading stories… I guess because it seems that in order for an LI to be a billionaire, he either has to be a cold, ruthless businessman or someone involved in illegal activity.

Armando… at least I haven’t seen that name in a story before. Except for one of my stories, Diary of a Middle School Teacher. The MC’s uncle’s name was Armando.

CATS??? :heart_eyes_cat: :heart_eyes_cat: :heart_eyes_cat:
WE’RE GOING TO GET ANIMATED KITTIES SOON???
I
CAN’T
WAIT
FOR
THAT
UPDATE!

At least the gem choice included a legitimate dress, even though it was cheap, and not a bath towel, trash bag, or old smelly gym clothes.

Notorious V---- oh, heck no!

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WHAT?!

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This!!! :yellow_heart: :yellow_heart:

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Awesome!

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Didn’t make it past first episode, bored me too much. Usually they’re bad enough to love but this one, no. It just lacks… everything?

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Lmao, wdym?

Ikr!! :pleading_face:

IKR :sob:
Why is that in a PG13 story?!

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Exactly!
That line does not belong in a PG-13 story.

I read the first chapter just to see if the cats were fully animated, but so far, it looks like the author just used two different cat overlays.

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