Episode Featured story: Stray Heart

[Secretz]

Description:

Why HOT? Why can’t I date a ordinary college dude/girl?

I’m impressed with the overlay animation.

Gem choices. Just so we can interct with with LI for some additional seconds.

Apparently, the LI has a gf.

OMG SO HOT!!!

More gem choices. Not to be rude but I prefer wearing something comfy.

Final thoughts:
This is better than the previous episode stories I’ve reviewed. I love the directing, and the dog overlay animation impressed me! Still on the cliche side, the gossip girls look like the characters in Mean Girls, and a lot of cliche scenes, We know have TWO black best friends, with one engaged with the LI’s

[Ouijaloveletters]

I might actually read this.

[Dramatic15]

@Secretz

I’m impressed with the overlay animation.

Actually, that’s not an overlay. We have dogs in Episode that have various animations we can use. There’s a decent selection of breeds to choose from.

[Secretz]

Oh. I haven’t visited the portal for a long time so I didn’t know the update. Thanks for telling.

[Duckling]

@Talu isn’t that your story? Congrats on getting featured

[josiej8]

I’ve read it. It’s not bad actually but the coding could use a bit of brushing up

[ethereal]

read it for the dog
honestly… not too nad

[Talu]

Thank you!
What I read of it wasn’t too bad!
Although I spent all my gems and then took a break and never started again.

[Littlefeets]

Just adding a couple tags

[ShanniiWrites]

@Talu you’re featured? congrats so so much! You really deserve it!

[Talu]

Haha long time between comments. But thank you!