Finding Motivation: I need some help

Shot at by a gun. They call assassinations hits. It’s yakuza story if that helps.

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Oh ok. I was just kinda confused by the wording. Ok so who hits them/why do they get hit?

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It’s a rival gang who setups the hit. They are trying to get rid of said boyfriend because the main character is being forced into an arranged marriage with the son of the boss of the rival gang. Also the covnversation has something to do with a past choice that caused the end of her last relationship and mental plus physical harm in a sense to her. (They won’t be together by the end of the story)

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That blur really doesn’t hide the comment very well. Yoh can still see what it says.

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Ok so there are different gangs and they’re trying to kill her boyfriend because she’s in an arranged marriage with the son of their boss?
Ok cool.
What do you want the reader’s to get out of this scene/what is the goal for this scene? It seems pretty important.
Also what is MC’s reaction to her bf and her getting shot?

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The reaction I want is anger at what he did because it screwed over her life when her past relationship ended. Also, the realization of what the other gang has done. I can go over the scene in more detail in pm. I just don’t want to spoil any main stuff.

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Ok- feel free to PM me!

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Thank you! I will do it now!

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This seems to have been completed