Anna: Jamie is a girl! Get over it!
Carl: HE is a boy!
Anna: No! She’s a girl. Jamie starts trembling and falls backwards into Anna’s arms and into a chair
Anna: Jamie…?
Jamie: I-I’m cold. Anna sees blood going down Jamie’s arm (Blood not shown) and calls 911 At The Hospital
Anna: I’m so glad you’re alright.
Jamie: You’re the best, Anna.
Jamie is the MC. Male-to-female transgender person
Good dialogue but I think you need to add in more of an understanding of surroundings in the scene. Like How did Jamie get hurt? Did Carl do something to Jamie? Who are these characters in the story?
Okay, for certain parts you will have to use a narrator box like for instance for the injury on the arm. You can use the faint animation for when Jamie actually collapses but you will need to put that in a narrator box along with the animation.
ANNA (talk_angry)
Jamie is a girl! Get over it!
CARL (talk_accuse_angry)
HE is a boy!
ANNA (talk_asif_angry)
No! She’s a girl!
@JAMIE is faint
Narrator
Jamie starts trembling and falls backward into Anna’s arms and into a chair.
ANNA (talk_startled_neutral)
Jamie…?
JAMIE (idle_lay_exhausted_loop)
I-I’m cold.
@ANNA is react_shocked_gasp
NARRATOR
Anna sees blood going down Jaime’s arm and calls 911.
@ANNA is talk_phone_sad_loop
Use a blanket overlay to make look like Jamie is laying down.
ANNA (talk_sit_shrug_neutral) or (talk_sit_reasure_happy)
I’m so glad you’re alright.
JAMIE (talk_sit_leanback_neutral)
You’re the best, Anna.
I’m not sure what positions you wanted or directions the characters are facing but try this dialogue out to see what you think.