This for me to get your 100% HONEST and RAW opinions on the scene below:
Abby and her new friends are hanging out at the skating rink Abby falls but laughs Jane helps her up
Jane: You okay?
Abby: Yeah, I’m having lots of fun! Molly walks up
Molly: If it isn’t the coward!
Molly: Did you really think moving schools would save you?
Molly: You’re a loser! Molly walks away
Gabby: Ab- Abby runs away in tears Jane, Gabby and Layla run after her
Gabby: Abby!
Abby: I’m fine…
Abby: I just wish she would stop targeting me…
Abby: (I’m gonna tell Jace what happened when I get home.)
Molly bullied Abby to the point she attempted suicide (because she was already miserable), attacked her after that, and Abby switched schools.I don’t know how to write Molly still trying to bully Abby.
In my honest opinion, it’s a bit cliche. Why not make it so Molly comes up to them and insults Abby and instead of Abby running off and crying she’d just tell them she’d just wish for Molly to stop targeting her or out-rightly confront her.
I don’t really know the build up to this scene so I’m just telling you what I imagine happening from here.
Abby and her new friends are hanging out at the skating rink Abby falls but laughs Jane helps her up
Jane: You okay?
Abby: Yeah, I’m having lots of fun! Molly walks up
Molly: If it isn’t the coward!
Molly: Did you really think moving schools would save you?
Molly: You’re a loser! Molly walks away
Gabby: Ab-
Abby: I’m fine. I just wish she’d stop targeting me…
