My Story: Darkness Behind The Mask

I’m the middle of writing a fantasy story. I would like advice on how to improve it, I’m not done yet, but I’d also like tips on how to make it longer. Just, what you liked, and what you didn’t like so much. I guess this is a promotion? I’ll stop rambling now.

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(Don’t forget the tag! :wink:)

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Oh wait! If it’s advice you’re looking for, maybe another category is better? @ChaoticDeluge?

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Moved to help and advice as that’s the primary objective of the post :smiley:

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Bump! Did you release this yet? If you did I’d like to read it lol. I need some more stuff to read!

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No, I put the link to read! I have not released it yet.

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