Ninth House | Chat

[Kristi]

who knows

[raviola]

liar

[raviola]

exactly
no one knows
because they dont exist
lesbian

[raviola]

@Madilnel

Renlin lay sprawled on the floor of his room, a chaotic collage of papers surrounding him. Some sheets contained intricate, dark lines spiraling across their surfaces, while others remained untouched or crumpled in frustration. His eyes were shut, and his face turned toward the room’s entrance. Was he asleepy? Certainly not. In his peculiar state, he floated between wakefulness and dreams, a realm where the desire for rest battled against the reluctance to let go into a nightmarish sleep.

AH I WAS WAITING FOR THIS
10/10 hook

@Madilnel

He had missed her performanc

aw no
also oh no hes lateeee

@Madilnel

"Looks like Daddy didn’t sprinkle enough stardust to make this night truly enchanting for you?”

ok bae
i like him

@Madilnel

“What secrets are you concealing beneath that gilded mask?"

great question

[astxrism]

@Kristi

came from nepotism

go nepo babies

@Kristi

Hmm bolder

evil

@Kristi

could they not have taken someone uglier?

@Kristi

if he had run away, what had been his reason and where did he go? Either way, it did not truly concern her, but it did make her feel a little uneasy.

hmmm

[astxrism]

@Madilnel

The scarce hours of rest he managed the previous night were abruptly interrupted, leaving him in this disheveled and contemplative state.

ooooooh

@Madilnel

Anyone entering the room might question if they stumbled upon a scene involving an autopsy.

@Madilnel

Eventually, he found himself drawn to a red-headed raven, a captivating encounter he was thrilled to come across.

hihi

@Madilnel

"Looks like Daddy didn’t sprinkle enough stardust to make this night truly enchanting for you?”

how can you telllll
go awayyy

[Kristi]

@astxrism

evil

HEY EXCUSE YOU

shes just bold

[Madilnel]

@astxrism

how can you telllll
go awayyy

Oh he just started!!!

[Madilnel]

@Madilnel

asleepy

Also only noticed this in your quote @raviola but also it works for him

[Madilnel]

@raviola

hook

“Reel the reader in like a fish” I say this to my students all the time

[Madilnel]

I should show them my writing from here. Really wow them!!

[Madilnel]

Picture this

[Madilnel]

Now ness when I get home
Excited for her with Thalia tho

[raviola]

@Madilnel

Also only noticed this in your quote @raviola but also it works for him

AH YES
i didnt want to be mean and spell check you bc like u said its so renlin

@Madilnel

“Reel the reader in like a fish” I say this to my students all the time

LOL
wait you haveeee 1st grade? i wanna say

@Madilnel

Really wow them!!

aw

@Madilnel

Picture this

pls

[Madilnel]

@raviola

1st grade

Yes! Most of their hooks are questions like
Have you ever seen a snake?
Have you ever seen the Taylor swift movie?
Do you like Disney?

[Madilnel]

I’ll add my banner and a song and colors when I have my computer because that was all on my phone

[Madilnel]

@raviola

mean and spell check

Puuuuhhhlease who am I without a spelling error

[Jass]

I was so excited to get posts out for this RP but my period has been killing me tonight, I haven’t been able to do anything

[Caticorn]

The Ouai curl cream is amazing

Lives up to the hype

[raviola]

@Madilnel

Yes! Most of their hooks are questions like
Have you ever seen a snake?
Have you ever seen the Taylor swift movie?
Do you like Disney?

awww
thats so good tho! i dont think my teachers taught me about hooks until i was in like 4th grade

@Madilnel

I’ll add my banner and a song and colors when I have my computer because that was all on my phone

oh frick i forgot colors