I think you’re writing her pretty well
I struggle with Atlas ngl
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Dom is surprisingly super easy
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If either of u struggle I can’t tell
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Yeah I struggle with Oggy too 
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You think so? Like for real? I feel I’m still a bit all over the place with her
And come on, Atlas is written amazingly 
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I feel like writing Dom is just
What is the most bitter grandpa thing I could do
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Oof, I’m in so much pain rn, so I think this’ll be all activity from me today
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Ok good 
Honestly I can’t tell with oggy either
Maybe it’s us knowing our characters best
She has a specific vibe that matches idk how to explain, and her personality is consistent
So she doesn’t seem too over the place to me
Thanksss I struggle with dialogue mainly for Atlas
And also deciding what his actual personality is
And how much of it he shows
YEAH This puts it into words
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Nooo get well soon
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Stupid IBS, I’ve surprisingly been mostly pain free for the last week, but today it’s fully back 
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Okay, this honestly is good to know. I feel we as writer all all our biggest critics, so it’s good to see people don’t really see this…
I mean, his dialogue is fineeee
But I get the 2nd part, I feel I haven’t yet seen the authentic Atlas
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Okay, now I’m really gone
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Ikr
And we remember all the details about our characters so it’s easier to spot mistakes
But otherwise most won’t care
I thought Atlas was kinda all over the place but I’m trying to coordinate him more
I feel like I’m making him sound too unrealistic kinda because who talks like that
Buuut you’ll meet the real him eventually
Especially considering plans
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Feeling a lot better today, pain is almost fully gone.
So hopefully I can really get some writing done today, tho I’ll also have to watch Poland-Netherland!
This yes. Even in small little things that are inaccurate, I notice them. While I’m sure other people wouldn’t really notice whatsoever
I don’t think he’s all over the place tho
Idk, I feel it’s not a problem. If you think that’s the way he talks, it’s not unrealistic. And to me, I don’t think it’s even that unrealistic. Plus, we are in an unrealistic world, lol, so who says our characters have to talk completely like humans would?
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Ooof, instead of writing I’ve been mostly focused on solving wifi and graphic driver issues First my wifi wasn’t working, and then my laptop screen started flashing black and stuff which I’m trying to solve now…
Updated, laptop restarted and seems fine, so problems solved. Back to writing now
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Dante post is coming tomorrow @eunoia. I made a start writing it but don’t feel like finishing it rn
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No worries hun 
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Sameee
For some reason my characters need to perfectly follow what I wrote
And I pay attention to consistency so much
Trueee
I just made him really dramatic to cover that part
But it’s dark academia so it does change a bit of what’s normal dialogue
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Ahhh guys send me ur instas/TikToks if I don’t have them so I can send u a tiktok I made of the characters 
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