I figured since I’ve been posting on these forums more I might share my story with you all.
Note: This is not a r4r thread but rather a place where I can keep people updated on my story in case anyone is interested.
Title: Perfectly Aligned
Author: Baleigh Roberts
Episodes: 10 and ongoing
Short Description: Blaire feels hopeless after tragedy hits, but new boy Alex might be just what she needs to get things perfectly aligned again; including her heart.
Long Description: Blaire has always been on top. Top dancer, most popular, best student… She’s thrived on the knowledge of knowing she’s “perfect” and that nothing can realistically touch her. At least that’s what she thinks. When a sudden tragedy happens, Blaire is suddenly face to face with feelings and emotions she didn’t know she had, causing her to start to doubt her previous mindset.
And in comes Alex, a new boy and one who has his own baggage to carry. A dying father, separated parents, and a depressed sister are enough for him to have his own issues.
When their two worlds collide will it be enough? And will they be able to work on the broken pieces of each other in order to find themselves perfectly aligned?
I read the first chapter (most of it) and I like your writing! I also like your MC’s personality.
The only thing that is turning me off is her look. I feel the need to change her face shape and lips shape so much! I know you said you arent allowing due to art scenes. Usually if someone were to write this to me, I’d roll my eyes and ignore, but if you need any help with allowing a little more customization, I’d be available to help. I just worry that others may be thinking the same, and I wouldn’t want people to quit reading just because of that, when your writing is totally worth reading!
I’ve actually been thinking about allowing a bit more customization, but was wary because there are some things I wouldn’t want to change (skin color for example because I want to try and use limb overlays in the story) and I know some people get upset if they can’t do complete and total CC.
I wouldn’t mind people having the chance to play around with Blaire more so long as her main “look” is still present (black hair and green eyes for example).
I think it’s a good idea. I feel picky saying that the face shape matters to me, but there are a couple I just dont like, and you chose one hahahhaha.
Also the guy! Hes cute, but everyone has different tastes and he could be hot
Like I said, I can help if u need it. Just let me know.
I’ve been terrible about keeping this thread updated, but since I have, 11 episodes so far have been published, and I have over 2k reads (screams internally). I’m going to be revamping my first 11 episodes, though, before releasing episode 12 hopefully by the end of this month.
