Abby and her new friends are hanging out at the skating rink
Abby falls but laughs
Jade helps her up
Molly walks up
Molly: If it isn’t the coward!
Molly: Did you really think moving schools would save you?
Molly: You’re a loser!
Molly walks away
Molly: Ab-
Abby runs away in tears
I will look at this a little bit later. Is that alright?
Well, it’s kinda late for me and I want to know what to improve before I end up falling asleep. But sure
Okay, do you want animations like last time?
If it’s not too much trouble
Is this a full scene?
Maybe you should write some more. With longer scenes and more dialogues, I (maybe others) can get more of an idea about the story.
If we have a good feel for the scene, then better opinions can be made.
I can’t form much of an opinion yet
Place the characters in the spots you want them in.
@ABBY is fall
@ABBY is laugh_sit_crackup
@JADE is pickup_paper_neutral
@ABBY is transition_sit_to_stand (You are going to want to put Abby on the ground like she is sitting there then have Jade act as if she is helping her up with the pickup paper animation.
@MOLLY enters to position from left/right
MOLLY (talk_sarcastic)
If it isn’t the coward!
MOLLY (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
Did you really think moving schools would save you?
@MOLLY is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
MOLLY (talk_accuse_angry)
You’re a loser!
@MOLLY walks to spot while walk_neutral (You might need to work on this part for the right coding)
@MOLLY turns right/left
MOLLY (talk_prentuous_point)
Ab-
@ABBY exits left/right while run_cry_embarrsed_loop
Let me know if you need anymore help with this scene.
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