Story review with honest feedback

Heyyyy :grin:
So I published my first episode story in late January and I wanted to get some reviews on what people thought about it. I’ve spent a lot of time on this forums and this site reading peoples dislikes and likes about stories and I wanted to see what peoples opinions were on mine and if there was anything I could maybe fix.
If you’re interested in reviewing it and giving me honest feedback, then please don’t hesitate to respond to this.

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Sure! I’ll check it out. You’re not going to get mad if I don’t like it, are you? Just making Sure.

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No I won’t get mad, I promise :blush:
So I finished the first chapter. Still working on the second one, but you can read the half of it that’s published if you’d like. And thank you so much.

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It’s pretty good. I usually read in Limelight, so the Ink surprised me. You do have some grammatical errors, though.

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Thank you so much. Would you mind if I pm’d you to ask some questions?

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Of course. Go right ahead.

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