Second option!
WellâŚyou could also hide in his van!
But then he wonât kidnap you, youâd kidnap yourself for him.
But thatâs like walking right into his trap.
MaybeâŚmaybe not
You try to make him talk to gain some time until someone comes to help you. âWhy are you doing this? Why me?â you ask, hoping to get him to tell his story. âYou should know why. Iâve been following your blog ever since youâve started writing. I liked every post even if it was just an unnecessary update about your amazing journey around the world. I started following your friends, made comments to your posts and tried making you famous! And what did you do to thank me? Nothing!â he shouts at you and you feel like you canât move. All of this, just because you ignored a fan? Just because you didnât notice him? âYou ignored all my private messages, every supportive post I made! Iâve spent all those hours helping you and your blog for nothing!â You hear a police siren far away and hope itâs the one coming to you and not to someone else. At the same moment you notice that heâs very close to you. While youâre still sitting, heâs standing right in front of you. You just have to distract him for a bit longer! âYou could have stopped following meâ you say, trying to make him more furious so he will be less attentive. âI wanted to! But your blog is everywhere! Everyone knows about the perfect traveler. Everyone knows your name! I wanted to meet you in person to see if I can get back to liking you. But you werenât very nice. You didnât even notice I was the one who commented on your post about a stranger coming to your campsite. Itâs not yours! You are just a spoilt city kid and the world doesnât need more of you!â He seems to be too furious and invested in telling his story to notice the police siren getting louder. When you think they are close enough, you gather all your confidence and lean back to kick him with your foot. He didnât see it coming and stumbles backwards before falling down. You stand up and run in the direction of the main road. You see car lights and get a feeling of relief. At the same time you notice that you canât feel your fingers anymore. They are numb. Just a second later you have the same feeling in your tongue and your toes. As your feet get numb, you stumble and fall. Whatâs happening? You remember the sausages he gave you. Youâve eaten one of them for dinner. Your arms feel numb but you see a police car coming your way. Behind you, you hear that guy laughing. âIâll get you one dayâ he screams. Then his voice gets downed out by the car noises. You see an ambulance right after the police car. Theyâll be able to safe you this time. But your life will never be the same again.
THE END
Omg, where have I been?
Yay, you managed not the get killed this time! But you were very close
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That was an interesting motivation⌠very creepy
Haha! I canât wait for the next story!
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