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Because she was then a hypocrite for getting angry if she was sleeping with Tommy (that’s what he thinks happened)
Secondly, the kiss never would have happened if Helen and Tommy didn’t ignore all of Dave’s texts

That’s an easy fix np

Also I noticed you also made a mistake in your last post and forgot to mention it

When Dave said this they were still at the party

Was one of the last few sentences of the post meaning that they only reached the hall only after that was suggested, not before

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